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awesome

Would have been better if you had made the sound quality higher.

Almost perfect

One criticism I would give is you should make the animation a bit cleaner. At the moment it's sort of messy, and it's sometimes difficult to see whats going on because everything looks like scribble. But apart from that, this a great short film. Want to see more from you in the future!

Not bad.

It's not as bad as you seem to think it is.

Would have been better...

with a better voice actor. No offence :3

But otherwise it was good. Some of those faces were classic.

I couldn't watch the whole thing.

That song just made my brain melt out of my ears.
But what was with thoise retarded bird guys? Looks to me like you were making a madness movie and changed it at the last second...

Yeaaaaah, about that...

I'm pretty sure the majority of Newgrounds doesn't speak German. For those who do... wtf just happened?
...
Do you even speak English?

Couple of improvements...

Sparta jokes /= flash success.
Also, you NEED to improve your lip syncing. Seriously, watching them talk is like watching some obscure Japanese anime that has been (badly) dubbed into english.
Lastly, a loading bar and play button. Having your movie loop constantly is just annoying.

Why did this take ages to make?

Seriously, I could have done this in 2 seconds. UNless you actually FBF'd the van going into the water, which is plain stupid. When I clicked on this, I was expecting somethng more like a summary of the movie in one minute, but this hardly does it justice.

Sethdd responds:

do you really think this would take me ages to make... it took me 1 minute to animate it. probably took me longer just to find the song.

Some tips

1. Shape tweens are never cool. Ever.
2. Try slowing down the speed of the text. This is pretty much what I read: "They thought GARBELKFNEicnges Wrong!"
3. You should also take the above tip and apply it to your animation. When your ninja guy got hit with that stick or whatever it was, it happened so fast I barely knew what was happening.

Turtlepoop responds:

Cheers, bud :) (y)

Good, but too many tweens.

It was good, but sometimes the tweens just stood out so much it took away from the spectacle of the rest of the movie.

RiverJordan responds:

...What tweens? That was a 3D camera moving through 3D space boii!

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