try harder
voices were ok, just make them softer and less static-y. i could see you were trying to go 'humor' but next time, it has to be funnier. plus, a good punchline is always fast. wasnt much of a plotline. kind of boring. try to make it more like a casual conversation when they're talking, cause your characters were... saying something.... then pausing.... before the response.......... just make it more interesting next time.